Thursday, 7 August 2014

Punctuating a paragraph

“Go yelled dad” He was yelling at the TV, while watching the boxing during the commonwealth games. Dad was watching very intensely. David Nyika looked strong, “boom” his opponent was knocked to the ground, hooray! We all shouted David won gold and he is a champion “wow”. “I thought I want to be a boxer when I grow up”.

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