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Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Narrative Writing

WALT: Write a narrative about fake stories.


Word HereSpooky creepy no sun

dark cloudy no peopleforest tall sticks no animalsgloomy no green leaves insectsfoggy no grass can’t see the sky murky no colour dead leaves


CHARACTERS…
1 dead girl - Isabella.
1 dead girl - Isabella.
3 girls - Charlotte, Allison, Lisa
3 girls - Charlotte, Allison, Lisa
3 boys - Dj, Jake, Mike.
3 boys - Dj, Jake, Mike.
A well - Isabella( after the girl that fell in it )
A well - Isabella( after the girl that fell in it )

Once upon a time, There was a young girl named Isabella. She was walking around in the woods because she was angry, Isabella sat down and saw a well, she thought that she had to check it out so she went. But she was just sitting on top of the well. After a moment she fell asleep then when she woke up she saw water upon her so she screamed as loud as she can, she struggled but it was no use. She stayed there for 4 months and that was when her mother died from an accident. Isabella died in there, but she didn’t really die it was like she became a devil or something but she didn’t really die. The only time she knew her mother died was when 3 boys named Jake, Dj and mike came walking along in the woods then saw the well but didn’t look inside, they just sat there and was talking about how Isabella’s mother died. Isabella heard them, So she screamed and they looked into the  well and saw her. They ran away because when they looked in the well they saw a greyed skin and black eyed girl. “They ran and ran”. The next day they came back to the well and saw Isabella they looked closely to her and then they yelled “Isabella”. Isabella woke up and said “help help me please” Isabella said. The boys went and got help but all they saw was there 3 best friends, named Charlotte, Allison and Lisa. “They were girls”. They told them the story and they rashed to get her out, but one thing they didn’t  know was that she wasn’t alive yet. They pulled her out and she ran away they ran after her and that was the last time anyone saw them. But the lucky bit was that Isabella didn’t kill them. They became friends again, But that wasn’t the end.

 

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