Re-crafting.

For Re - crafting I had to read a small paragraph and when I'm done I had to Deconstruct it then Re - craft it. 

Ukura & Pulotu: My neighbour’s granddaughter, Adrianna, came over.  On a exhausted sunny day, we were smelling and sweating like hippos and bursting hot,what we needed to do is just cool off. So we decided to go to the beach that had nice and cold water. We sweated like rain drops dripping down our face. While we were in the nice and cool water we didn’t Bother to get out. Every sunny day we would go to the beach where the water is just like hippos.