tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2630447966826933599.post5907120310816952435..comments2023-06-02T03:29:23.342+12:00Comments on Lotu @ Pt England School: Butter, Butter, ButterPES Blogs Admin 2014http://www.blogger.com/profile/15710822352595092146noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2630447966826933599.post-52056191400309131572016-03-15T11:51:42.105+13:002016-03-15T11:51:42.105+13:00ThanksThanksLotuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08697358349790374561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2630447966826933599.post-74758644985867770122015-09-08T10:09:23.666+12:002015-09-08T10:09:23.666+12:00I agree your introduction is clear, we just need t...I agree your introduction is clear, we just need to work on hooking in your reader. Try and use some of the techniques we have been practising in class Lotu.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04944050789204527699noreply@blogger.com